Dwane Facey - If you've done nothing wrong

Submitted by Rob Watson on Mon, 24/03/2008 - 18:45.

Two guys working in a hotel find a mobile phone, testing their consciences.

Dialogue

Submitted by Joanna23 on Mon, 30/06/2008 - 14:12.

The dialogue in this piece is excellent - the way the two guys start speaking more quickly, having to change what they had said and keep re-explaining themselves. Also, in leaving the ending open the listener still isn't quite sure that they will do the morally sound thing.

Joanna

Nice idea

Submitted by abigaillefleming on Mon, 31/03/2008 - 11:40.

I liked the moment you'd chosen for this drama - the point at which you haven't actually done anything and yet you know you have really!

If You've Done Nothing wrong

Submitted by jeremyjmortimer on Thu, 27/03/2008 - 16:08.

I really like the improvised dialogue in this

Jeremy M