Jason Burford - Paranoia

Submitted by Rob Watson on Mon, 24/03/2008 - 14:16.

Paranoia, something we all suffer from time to time. This fictitious rendition of Arnold Biggs journal as a prison Guard in Dartmoor prison looks into the despair of one particular prisoner opens our eyes to a now dated look at a system imprisoning more than a 10% rise in young offenders every year in the uk today, was Biggs really that wrong?

Tragedy

Submitted by Joanna23 on Mon, 30/06/2008 - 14:24.

It's difficult to build enough tension in a 3 minute short to warrant a tragedy but I feel you have achieved this through a good script and a competent actor in the lead role. I Really enjoyed this one.

Joanna.

Paranoia

Submitted by abigaillefleming on Mon, 31/03/2008 - 11:32.

I agree with Jeremy about the walkie-talkies, and I really liked the choice of music. It was nicely ominous and sustained the tension of the piece well.

Prison Drama

Submitted by jeremyjmortimer on Thu, 27/03/2008 - 16:13.

Good and interesting approach to first person naration in this - and I really liked the use of music and the walkie-talkie static to add to the drama.
Jeremy M